| Am I the only one who finds it hard to write descs? | |
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+3JQJenny Unruly Opal Moonflower 7 posters |
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Opal Moonflower Staff
Number of posts : 102 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-02-16
| Subject: Am I the only one who finds it hard to write descs? Sun Mar 11, 2007 8:36 am | |
| Ok, well I write poems in descs because im rubbish at looking like descs. No not all these corney ones x3;. But im just bored so ill show you what happened when I was trying to come up with my desc...
Don't go there No no, that sounds like someones being... ew. Ok so i want something thats stoping people... Ok how about Dont walk in the water. What water? Agh, ok don't walk in front. Uh.. OF ME. Ok we have our first line. Geez, second line. Cause' im not that type of person. What type of person? D: Ok i don't wanna follow you. I wont follow you. I may not follow. OMG that works. Ok im just gonna use this first line. Don't walk behind. Do not walk behind me. I don't want you to follow me. Don't be a pervert. Grrr, ok second line. I may not lead. Phoo, I can't be bothered to take you. Walk there and forget it. Walk next to me, uh beside me? Just walk beside me. Grrr... And leave me alone. Be my friend god. Just be my friend. OK I HAVE A POEM. Uh... how am I gonna lay it out?
After about 10 minuetes I finally found out how to lay it out, the finished artical:
Do not walk in front of me; I may not follow. Do not walk behind me; I may not lead. Just walk beside me; And be my friend.
By the by, I write poems for other people too. Just tell me if you want me to make you one... for free :> | |
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Unruly Staff
Number of posts : 10 Age : 31 Registration date : 2007-03-08
| Subject: Re: Am I the only one who finds it hard to write descs? Sun Mar 11, 2007 9:48 am | |
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JQJenny Staff
Number of posts : 34 Age : 33 Location : --- Registration date : 2007-03-08
| Subject: Re: Am I the only one who finds it hard to write descs? Sun Mar 11, 2007 11:40 am | |
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Opal Moonflower Staff
Number of posts : 102 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-02-16
| Subject: Re: Am I the only one who finds it hard to write descs? Mon Mar 12, 2007 12:07 pm | |
| I've acctually just remembered my old poem in my desc. The first one I did A long long time ago*... Wanna see how it went? Well, basicly the same as the last one but hey, should be fun to see...
If you are an idiot. Agh, here i go again. Messing up the first line. If it's night time. If im not there. If it's dark out. If im alone in the dark. Hmmm, I could separate them... So we have if I am alone. And all is dark. Go away cause' I don't like you. Everyone I ate. Eveyrone is eaten. Everyone has gone to sleep potty train themselves. go depart. Ah, ok. I ain't scared. Your not scary. Then I am not scared. Phew, quickest line so far. But hiding alone. But roosting. But ROASTING. Aww what?
I sat there for a while. Thinking of what to put. Suddenly, I heard a little girl crying outside my window. I looked out of it and I saw what seeemed to be a conquer match. The little girl had lost. Thats when it hit me. No not the conquer, the idea!
But conquering fear. Now THAT is classy. Ok now.... what next. Of you. Of the world. Of global warming. Of unfairness. Of this unfair planet place world that we live in. Finished article:
If I am alone, And all is dark, And everyone has gone to depart, then I am not scared, but conquering fear, of this unfair world we live in.
*I had only just joined furc when I wrote this. So it's not my best :3 | |
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Jozua Ancient Member
Number of posts : 97 Age : 33 Location : Furcadia Registration date : 2007-03-10
| Subject: Re: Am I the only one who finds it hard to write descs? Mon Mar 12, 2007 5:52 pm | |
| Ohh... I liked the second one... Thats gonna be my NEW desc! thankies! x3 | |
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Opal Moonflower Staff
Number of posts : 102 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-02-16
| Subject: Re: Am I the only one who finds it hard to write descs? Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:49 am | |
| lol, glad you liked it x3 | |
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Trees Staff
Number of posts : 67 Age : 32 Location : Ayaerana, Lot 1. Registration date : 2007-03-13
| Subject: Re: Am I the only one who finds it hard to write descs? Tue Mar 13, 2007 7:06 pm | |
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Sasuke Junior Member
Number of posts : 14 Age : 31 Location : Not at this dream. Registration date : 2007-03-10
| Subject: Re: Am I the only one who finds it hard to write descs? Tue Mar 13, 2007 8:30 pm | |
| I personally don't find it very hard. It's just the spacing that annoys me. | |
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Flame God Member
Number of posts : 24 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-05-08
| Subject: Re: Am I the only one who finds it hard to write descs? Thu May 10, 2007 2:22 pm | |
| Love the poem style descs Opal. I also took a while to make my descs ( I have three alts with god in their name.) The descriptions are all the same really. Some descs are short but sweet like Meep! I would have chosen Mep though. | |
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