peachfruity Mini Member
Number of posts : 6 Age : 27 Registration date : 2007-03-10
| Subject: The Bully Tue Mar 20, 2007 7:25 pm | |
| Chapter one Me and kaylib [ yes he is one of my friends in rl] Were playing outside on the ice. Our teacchter Mrs.felton [shelton in rl], Told us to get off the ice. A bigge rkid came and took my hat. His name was Big guy. Kaylib yellowpaws protected me from the bully. We went in and i went in the classroom. The big bullly Was sitting in my chair. He was way bigger than me. MY ta mrs>Felinepaws [mcloed in rl] yelled at him to ge tout of my share. I yelled" Gimme back ym *****in hat". I got snet to the office. My t.a. told me "No more swear or your out of the Y and furrekids gulid! for good" I went outside again. The bully stole my hat again Kaylib yellowpaws was on the ice. He was sent inside for fighting. IT was too late. | |
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Jozua Ancient Member
Number of posts : 97 Age : 33 Location : Furcadia Registration date : 2007-03-10
| Subject: Re: The Bully Tue Mar 20, 2007 8:08 pm | |
| Theres to many typos. I can't even understand them | |
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